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More Than Just A Word
Being "thankful" is not merely having an
overly-full stomach, with your friends
and family gathered all around you,
on a celebratory autumn day;
Being "thankful" is also good food
filling, and warming, your empty belly,
with your fellow homeless people gathered
all around you, on any given day.
Being "grateful" is not just the sound of rain
dancing on the roof of your dry car—where
the most you have to worry about is being
ticketed for speeding within city limits;
Being "grateful" is also the rain singing on
the roof of a city-permitted tent city—where
you no longer have to worry about being
ticketed for camping within city limits.
Being "helpful" is not simply offering to
let a total stranger cut in line in front of
you, during the busy holiday season, in
order to give their tired feet some rest;
Being "helpful" is also offering to let a total
stranger stay in the unused camper in your
backyard, during the off-season, in order
to help them to get back on their feet.
Being "hopeful" is not always longing
for exceptionally long-lasting and loving
relationships, a consumer-driven lifestyle,
or even untold fame and fortune;
Being "hopeful" is also having hot,
nutritious food, being able to find
affordable housing, and praying to be
shown a little kindness along the way.
-Paul Whiting
(a.k.a., A Creative Writer)
"I maybe say too much about how life really is!"
I budget for "carrying cash" each month in my monthly budgets for any expenses that I may wish to pay for in cash. And I budget—specifically—to use some of my carrying cash to help homeless folks who are panhandling, or "spanging" (which is a term that is a blend of the word 'spare' plus the word 'change' from the phrase, "Do you have any spare change?" or the phrase, "Can you spare any change?") and that is how I give "alms to the poor." –Paul Whiting (written December 26th, 2015, revised September 24th, 2019, revised December 23rd, 2021, revised December 24th, 2021, revised December 25th, 2021, revised December 26th, 2021 and revised July 6th, 2022)
My Writing Notes:
The reason that I wrote this poem can be summed up with the following statement: I wrote this poem after I was homeless for ten days in October of 2009!
And, for me, the toughest part about being homeless wasn't living outdoors, since I was basically "camping": it was the way that some people treated me, because I didn't have a place to live. [However, I should clarify that it never stormed while I was homeless, nor did it ever reach freezing temperatures; plus, I had money available to buy whatever I needed (the reader should know that I am HIV-positive and that I have full-blown AIDS) due to the fact that I am on "SSDI," or Social Security Disability Insurance.]
And so, I budget—specifically—to use some of my carrying cash to help homeless folks who are panhandling, or "spanging" (which is a term that is a blend of the word 'spare' plus the word 'change' from the phrase, "Do you have any spare change?" or the phrase, "Can you spare any change?") and that is how I give "alms to the poor."
By the way, the image illustrating this poem is "My Portable Condo," which was my portable housing for ten days, until I was able to get into 'hard housing,' so to speak, which was a tent city called "Dignity Village." Later on, I was able to get housing in a home that was operated by a straight married couple living there, where I rented out a room and lived with other individuals who were dealing with various housing-challenge issues. And, eventually, I moved into my current studio apartment, located in a low income housing apartment building, where I have lived since June of 2010.
Just so you know, I revised this poem, as I often do with my writing! And I changed how this poem was written when I was editing it on my "Paul Whiting — A Creative Writer," "Small All White in the Forest" and "Three Dark Horses" blogs. So, I wanted to show you how this poem used to be written, before I revised it as above.
And it used to be written like this:
More Than Just A Word
Being "thankful" is not merely having an
overly-full stomach, with your friends
and family gathered all around you,
on a celebratory autumn day;
Being "thankful" is also hot, nutritious
food filling and warming your empty belly,
with your fellow homeless people gathered
all around you, on any given day.
Being "grateful" is not just the sound of rain
dancing on the roof of your dry car—where
the most you have to worry about is being
ticketed for speeding within city limits;
Being "grateful" is also the rain singing on
the roof of a city-permitted tent city—where
you no longer have to worry about being
ticketed for camping within city limits.
Being "helpful" is not simply offering to
let a total stranger cut in line in front of
you, during the busy holiday season, in
order to give their tired feet some rest;
Being "helpful" is also offering to let a total
stranger stay in the unused camper in your
backyard, during the off-season, in order
to help them to get back on their feet.
Being "hopeful" is not always longing
for exceptionally long-lasting and loving
relationships, a consumer-driven lifestyle,
or even untold fame and fortune;
Being "hopeful" is also having hot,
nutritious food, being able to find
affordable housing, and praying to be
shown a little kindness along the way.
Thus, I revised this poem to be written as it is above.
And this poem was also published on my "Three Dark Horses" and "Small All White in the Forest" blogs (please see the hyperlinks below for the blogs), since I feel that the message in this poem applies to the message I am trying to convey through "Three Dark Horses" and "Small All White in the Forest." Plus, I feel that the message in this poem applies to the message I am trying to convey through my new "The Oneness Of God" spiritual practice!
This poem was written in Portland, Oregon.
-Paulee
https://threedarkhorses.blogspot.com
https://smallallwhiteintheforest.blogspot.com
This "Paul Whiting — A Creative Writer" Post No. 078 was edited on June 26th, 2024.
"Poetry is using the fewest words possible in order to describe all that is possible to describe." –Paul Whiting [June 1st, 2022]
